Our general feedback from last week was that the idea of having the toast burn to death at the end was a little morbid, though toast was a good idea.
What we needed to do was:
- Decide on whether we wanted our animation to be a Comedy or a Dark Comedy
- Should the point-of-view be of the chosen bread or the bread’s friends?
- Does he die at the end?
What we wanted:
- Bread being put in the toaster.
- A sudden shift of tone (excited to scared; scared to excited)
- Fast pace
- Funny finale